https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZgxjeW9eL4U
My feedback was more about me being a little monotone and not getting enough grabbers into my pitch. In other words, I needed to think of a better way to start it in order to pull the audience in more and set a strong tone to start. The most insightful was definitely starting my pitch and making it more approachable because if I don't start it well than I am already setting the mood of my audience and if its a negative mood than the rest of my pitch won't be as effective.
I changed the start of my pitch to a flashback approach. Bringing my audience back to right before they experience the need and put them in the shoes of that person so they truly get an idea of what the problem is and how it is being solved. I also was more physically into it, using my hands more and moving around a bit which I feel takes away some of the monotone problems I had prior.
Hey Christian! You did a great job in your video. It seemed like your video angle was not as centered as it could have been. Regardless, your delivery was great compared to your last pitch. I love how you started off with a story to get your audience to think. You then ended with a solution which is the major detail needed in all pitches. Great job overall!
ReplyDeleteHey Christian,
ReplyDeleteYour pitch was very informative from telling a detailed story to sharing statistics. Additionally, you definitely dressed for the professional part too. My favorite part of your pitch was the story and description you shared to paint an image to us of your ideal consumer. We are able to see vividly who this business idea is directed at. Great job!