https://youtu.be/SlXT58PdJuQ
Reflection- The feedback I received was that I could have done a better job centering my camera more because the last one was angled a little off. I also received some feedback that I could have worded my pitch a little smoother and grouped my words better.
Changes- The changes I tried to make was centering my camera a little better so you could see me at a more clear and effective angle. I got better at memorizing the pitch so I believe my words were a little more clear. However, with the pitch being a minute I felt I crunched my pitch a little more than last time and tried multiple times to end better but ended up having to end it on more of a cut off. I apologize for that but will adjust it for the next one but I feel I did much better at ending it the last elevator pitch and maybe tried to change it too much.
Hey Christian,
ReplyDeleteI really like your pitch; it was very clean and concise. I am sure you either memorized it or are just simply a good talker. Either way, it was precise and even had statistics which are a plus in my opinion. One suggestion I would give though is to be more enthusiastic in your pitch to get the audience engaged rather than just listening to stats for like 2 minutes and potentially getting bored no matter how good your pitch is.